Shloka 5.20-21Unverified draft

ये च बाणैर्न विध्यन्ति विविक्तमपरापरम् । शब्दवेध्यं च विततं लघुहस्ता विशारदा: ।।1.5.20।। सिंहव्याघ्रवराहाणां मत्तानां नर्दतां वने । हन्तारो निशितैश्शस्त्रैर्बलाद्बाहुबलैरपि ।।1.5.21।।

Meaning

Its warriors, sharp-handed and skilled, would never loose an arrow at a lone or defenseless man, or one fleeing, or one tracked merely by sound — yet with sharp weapons or bare strength of arm they could slay roaring, maddened lions, tigers and boars in the forest.

Word-by-word (pada-artha)

Shloka 1.5.20

WordDevanagariMeaningGrammatical role
ye ca bāṇai: na vidhyantiये च बाणैः न विध्यन्तिthose, also, with arrows, not, killVerb (present/imperative)
viviktam apara paramविविक्तम् अपर परम्lone one, at his hind [without a successor,] at his fore [without a predecessor]Accusative singular
sabda vedhyam ca vitatamसब्द वेध्यम् च विततम्by sound, killing, also, fleeing awayAccusative singular
laghu hastā: viśārada:लघु हस्ताः विशारदःacumen, handiness, skilful onesNominative singular (masc.)

Shloka 1.5.21

WordDevanagariMeaningGrammatical role
simha vyāghra varāhāṇāmसिम्ह व्याघ्र वराहाणाम्lions, tigers, wild boarsAccusative singular
mattānām nadatām vaneमत्तानाम् नदताम् वनेfattened ones, roaring, in forestsLocative/Dative singular
hantāra: nisitai: sastrai:हन्तारः निसितैः सस्त्रैःkillers, with sharp, weaponsNominative singular (masc.)
balāt bāhu balai: apiबलात् बाहु बलैः अपिwith might, by arms, might, alsoIndeclinable/particle

Scholar commentary

Shloka 1.5.20

valmikiramayan.net Prose Commentary

Desiraju Hanumanta Rao's prose rendering with embedded explanatory notes

(Part of the archers'-conduct passage, shlokas 20-21 -- see the fuller note at shloka 21.)

1 of 16 traditions have commentary on this shloka. Traditions without a verse-specific commentary here are omitted rather than filled in.

Shloka 1.5.21

valmikiramayan.net Prose Commentary

Desiraju Hanumanta Rao's prose rendering with embedded explanatory notes

The verse's description of Ayodhya's archers refusing to shoot at a fleeing target, a lone man without an heir, or by sound alone ('sonic archery') is connected by the source to a specific story about Dasharatha: in his youth, hunting by sound in the dark, he mistook the noise of a hermit's son filling a water-pot for a drinking animal and killed the boy by accident. The boy's father, a sage, cursed Dasharatha to die grieving for a son -- a curse fulfilled after Rama's exile. The source suggests this incident may be the very reason sound-based archery came to be regarded as dishonorable in Ayodhya.

1 of 16 traditions have commentary on this shloka. Traditions without a verse-specific commentary here are omitted rather than filled in.

Reference: 1.5.20-21 · Bāla Kāṇḍa