Shloka 2.10Unverified draft

तस्मात्तु मिथुनादेकं पुमांसं पापनिश्चय: । जघान वैरनिलयो निषादस्तस्य पश्यत: ।।1.2.10।।

Meaning

A cruel-hearted, sinful-minded hunter, harboring hostility, struck down the male of the pair right before the sage's eyes.

Word-by-word (pada-artha)

WordDevanagariMeaningGrammatical role
tasmāt mithunātतस्मात्तु मिथुनात्from that pairAblative of separation
tuतुand thenConnective particle
ekamएकम्oneObject — accusative singular
pumāṃsamपुमांसम्the maleObject in apposition — accusative
pāpaniścayaḥपापनिश्चयःone of sinful resolveBahuvrihi epithet of the hunter
jaghānaजघानstruck down, killedMain verb — perfect 3rd sg
vairanilayaḥवैरनिलयःan abode of enmityEpithet — nominative singular
niṣādaḥनिषादःthe Nishada hunterSubject — nominative singular
tasya paśyataḥतस्य पश्यतःwhile he (the sage) looked onGenitive absolute

Scholar commentary

valmikiramayan.net Prose Commentary

Desiraju Hanumanta Rao's prose rendering with embedded explanatory notes

The hunter is described as acting 'with all his evil intent, as he is an enemy of foresters' -- the text frames the killing itself, not just its effect on Valmiki, as morally marked from the outset.

1 of 16 traditions have commentary on this shloka. Traditions without a verse-specific commentary here are omitted rather than filled in.

Reference: 1.2.10 · Bāla Kāṇḍa