Shloka 2.30Unverified draft

तमुवाच ततो ब्रह्मा प्रहसन्मुनिपुङ्गवम् । श्लोक एव त्वया बद्धो नात्र कार्या विचारणा ।।1.2.30।।

Meaning

Then Brahma, smiling, said to the foremost of sages: "What you have composed is indeed a sloka — have no doubt about it."

Word-by-word (pada-artha)

WordDevanagariMeaningGrammatical role
tamतम्to himObject — accusative singular
uvācaउवाचsaidMain verb — perfect 3rd sg
tataḥततःthenAdverb — sequential
brahmāब्रह्माBrahmaSubject — nominative singular
prahasanप्रहसन्smilingPresent participle — nominative
munipuṅgavamमुनिपुङ्गवम्to the bull among sagesObject — accusative singular
ślokaḥ evaश्लोक एवa sloka indeedPredicate nominative + emphatic particle
tvayāत्वयाby youInstrumental — agent
baddhaḥबद्धःhas been bound / composedPast passive participle — nominative
na atraनात्रnot in this matterNegation + adverb
kāryāकार्याis to be madeGerundive — feminine nominative
vicāraṇāविचारणाdeliberation, doubtSubject — nominative singular

Scholar commentary

valmikiramayan.net Prose Commentary

Desiraju Hanumanta Rao's prose rendering with embedded explanatory notes

Still preoccupied, Valmiki recites the same verse a second time, involuntarily, grieving again for the female bird -- and it is only at this second recitation that Brahma confirms directly, smiling, that what Valmiki composed is genuinely a sloka, settling the uncertainty that had been troubling him since shloka 22.

1 of 16 traditions have commentary on this shloka. Traditions without a verse-specific commentary here are omitted rather than filled in.

Reference: 1.2.30 · Bāla Kāṇḍa