Shloka 2.14Unverified draft

तत: करुणवेदित्वादधर्मोऽयमिति द्विज: । निशाम्य रुदतीं क्रौञ्चीमिदं वचनमब्रवीत् ।।1.2.14।।

Meaning

Moved by compassion and judging the killing unjust, he heard the female krauncha's lament and spoke these words.

Word-by-word (pada-artha)

WordDevanagariMeaningGrammatical role
tataḥततःthereuponAdverb — sequential
karuṇaveditvātकरुणवेदित्वात्because of his sensitivity to compassionAblative of cause
adharmaḥ ayamअधर्मोऽयम्'this is unrighteous'Quoted judgement — nominative
itiइतिthus (marks the quotation)Quotative particle
dvijaḥद्विजःthe twice-born one (Valmiki)Subject — nominative singular
niśāmyaनिशाम्यhaving heardAbsolutive
rudatīmरुदतीम्weepingPresent participle feminine — accusative
krauñcīmक्रौञ्चीम्the female kraunchaObject of niśāmya — accusative
idam vacanamइदं वचनम्these wordsObject — accusative singular
abravītअब्रवीत्spokeMain verb — imperfect 3rd sg

Scholar commentary

valmikiramayan.net Prose Commentary

Desiraju Hanumanta Rao's prose rendering with embedded explanatory notes

Valmiki's compassion is described as arising specifically from judging the killing unjust, not merely from witnessing death -- the text is careful to distinguish sympathy from a moral verdict, since the verdict is what produces the curse in the next verse.

1 of 16 traditions have commentary on this shloka. Traditions without a verse-specific commentary here are omitted rather than filled in.

Reference: 1.2.14 · Bāla Kāṇḍa