ऊनषोडशवर्षो मे रामो राजीवलोचन:। न युद्धयोग्यतामस्य पश्यामि सह राक्षसै:।।1.20.2।।
Meaning
"My lotus-eyed Rama is not yet sixteen years old — I see no fitness in him for battle with rakshasas."
Word-by-word (pada-artha)
| Word | Devanagari | Meaning | Grammatical role |
|---|---|---|---|
| ūna-ṣoḍaśa-varṣaḥ me rāmaḥ | ऊन-षोडश-वर्षः मे रामः | my Rama, not yet sixteen years old | Nominative singular |
| rājīva-locanaḥ | राजीव-लोचनः | lotus-eyed | Nominative singular |
| na yuddha-yogyatām asya paśyāmi | न युद्ध-योग्यताम् अस्य पश्यामि | I do not see his fitness for battle | Verb (present) |
| saha rākṣasaiḥ | सह राक्षसैः | together with the demons | Instrumental plural |
Scholar commentary
valmikiramayan.net Prose Commentary
Desiraju Hanumanta Rao's prose rendering with embedded explanatory notes
The source notes Dasharatha's claim that Rama is 'less than sixteen' has generated extensive commentary, since Rama's age at this point is usually given as twelve -- confirmed by Maricha himself later telling Ravana 'as a boy of twelve, Rama killed my mother and hit me out' (3.38.6). The source connects this to a recurring numerological pattern in the epic: six kandas (half of twelve), 24,000 verses (two times twelve thousand), Rama born in the twelfth month, Sita's marriage in Rama's twelfth year, twelve years in Ayodhya before the exile, and twelve of Sita's years at Valmiki's hermitage in the Uttara Kanda. It also addresses a specific objection -- that Rama, not yet possessing all sixteen phases of the full moon (chaaru shodasha kalaa), is only a partial person and therefore unfit for night warfare against demons -- by noting Vishvamitra's own epithet raajiiva locana ('lotus-eyed') describes eyes that open at sunrise like a lotus, implying Rama's gaze itself (sun-moon-fire-eyed) can pierce the night regardless of his age.
2 of 16 traditions have commentary on this shloka. Traditions without a verse-specific commentary here are omitted rather than filled in.
Reference: 1.20.2 · Bāla Kāṇḍa