Shloka 20.2Unverified draft

ऊनषोडशवर्षो मे रामो राजीवलोचन:। न युद्धयोग्यतामस्य पश्यामि सह राक्षसै:।।1.20.2।।

Meaning

"My lotus-eyed Rama is not yet sixteen years old — I see no fitness in him for battle with rakshasas."

Word-by-word (pada-artha)

WordDevanagariMeaningGrammatical role
ūna-ṣoḍaśa-varṣaḥ me rāmaḥऊन-षोडश-वर्षः मे रामःmy Rama, not yet sixteen years oldNominative singular
rājīva-locanaḥराजीव-लोचनःlotus-eyedNominative singular
na yuddha-yogyatām asya paśyāmiन युद्ध-योग्यताम् अस्य पश्यामिI do not see his fitness for battleVerb (present)
saha rākṣasaiḥसह राक्षसैःtogether with the demonsInstrumental plural

Scholar commentary

valmikiramayan.net Prose Commentary

Desiraju Hanumanta Rao's prose rendering with embedded explanatory notes

The source notes Dasharatha's claim that Rama is 'less than sixteen' has generated extensive commentary, since Rama's age at this point is usually given as twelve -- confirmed by Maricha himself later telling Ravana 'as a boy of twelve, Rama killed my mother and hit me out' (3.38.6). The source connects this to a recurring numerological pattern in the epic: six kandas (half of twelve), 24,000 verses (two times twelve thousand), Rama born in the twelfth month, Sita's marriage in Rama's twelfth year, twelve years in Ayodhya before the exile, and twelve of Sita's years at Valmiki's hermitage in the Uttara Kanda. It also addresses a specific objection -- that Rama, not yet possessing all sixteen phases of the full moon (chaaru shodasha kalaa), is only a partial person and therefore unfit for night warfare against demons -- by noting Vishvamitra's own epithet raajiiva locana ('lotus-eyed') describes eyes that open at sunrise like a lotus, implying Rama's gaze itself (sun-moon-fire-eyed) can pierce the night regardless of his age.

2 of 16 traditions have commentary on this shloka. Traditions without a verse-specific commentary here are omitted rather than filled in.

Reference: 1.20.2 · Bāla Kāṇḍa