Shloka 68.9Unverified draft

सेयं मम सुता राजन् विश्वामित्रपुरस्सरै:। यदृच्छयागतैर्वीरैर्निर्जिता तव पुत्रकै:।

Meaning

'That very daughter of mine, O king, has now been won by your heroic son, who arrived here by chance with Vishwamitra at the fore.'

Word-by-word (pada-artha)

WordDevanagariMeaningGrammatical role
sā iyam mama sutā rājanसा इयम् मम सुता राजन्this same daughter of mine, O kingNominative / Nominative / Genitive / Nominative / Vocative
vishvāmitra-purassaraiḥविस्ह्वामित्र-पुरस्सरैःpreceded by VishvamitraInstrumental plural
yadṛcchayā āgataiḥ vīraiḥयदृच्छया आगतैः वीरैःby heroes who came by chanceInstrumental / Instrumental plural / Instrumental plural
nirjitā tava putrakaiḥनिर्जिता तव पुत्रकैःhas been won by your sonsNominative / Genitive / Instrumental plural

Scholar commentary

valmikiramayan.net Prose Commentary

Desiraju Hanumanta Rao's prose rendering with embedded explanatory notes

The source flags a grammatical nuance in Janaka's proposal: the phrase describing 'your valorous sons' uses a plural form, viiraiH putrakaiH, which might suggest both Rama and Lakshmana jointly won Sita. It explains this plural as an honorific 'royal we' applied to Rama alone, not a literal claim about Lakshmana, and cites an alternate manuscript reading of the same verse that uses the singular explicitly: seyam mama sutaa raajan vishvaamitrasya shaasanaat | puriim imaam samaagatya tava putreNa nirjitaa.

1 of 16 traditions have commentary on this shloka. Traditions without a verse-specific commentary here are omitted rather than filled in.

Reference: 1.68.9 · Bāla Kāṇḍa