Shloka 23.12Unverified draft

अवदग्धस्य रौद्रेण चक्षुषा रघुनन्दन। व्यशीर्यन्त शरीरात्स्वात्सर्वगात्राणि दुर्मते:।।1.23.12।।

Meaning

"O delight of Raghu's line, from Shiva's terrible eye burst forth a fire that scattered every limb of that foolish one's body."

Word-by-word (pada-artha)

WordDevanagariMeaningGrammatical role
avadagdhasya raudreṇa cakṣuṣāअवदग्धस्य रौद्रेण चक्षुषाof him being burnt by the terrible eyeGenitive singular / Instrumental
raghu-nandanaरघु-नन्दनO delight of the RaghusVocative singular
vyaśīryanta śarīrāt svātव्यशीर्यन्त शरीरात् स्वात्crumbled away from his own bodyVerb (imperfect, passive)
sarva-gātrāṇi durmateḥसर्व-गात्राणि दुर्मतेःall the limbs of that evil-minded oneNominative plural / Genitive singular

Scholar commentary

valmikiramayan.net Prose Commentary

Desiraju Hanumanta Rao's prose rendering with embedded explanatory notes

The source flags a manuscript variant here: some texts have avadhyat ('killed/slain'), while the critical edition has dagdhasya tasya raudreNa chakShuShaa ('burnt by his terrible eye') -- the source prefers the 'burnt' reading since Shiva's third eye is traditionally said to incinerate its target so completely that not even ashes remain, which is the stronger and more consistent reading with what follows (Kama being rendered entirely bodiless).

1 of 16 traditions have commentary on this shloka. Traditions without a verse-specific commentary here are omitted rather than filled in.

Reference: 1.23.12 · Bāla Kāṇḍa