Shloka 16.27-29Unverified draft

कौसल्यायै नरपति: पायसार्धं ददौ तदा। अर्धादर्धं ददौ चापि सुमित्रायै नराधिप:।।1.16.27।। कैकेय्यै चावशिष्टार्धं ददौ पुत्रार्थकारणात्। प्रददौ चावशिष्टार्धं पायसस्यामृतोपमम्।।1.16.28।। अनुचिन्त्य सुमित्रायै पुनरेव महीपति:। एवं तासां ददौ राजा भार्याणां पायसं पृथक्।।1.16.29।।

Meaning

The king then gave Kausalya half of the payasam, and of the remaining half gave half again to Sumitra; to Kaikeyi he gave half of what remained for the sake of sons, and after reflecting, gave the last remaining portion to Sumitra once more. Thus the king distributed the payasam separately among his wives.

Word-by-word (pada-artha)

Shloka 1.16.27

WordDevanagariMeaningGrammatical role
kausalyāyai nara-patiḥकौसल्यायै नर-पतिःto Kausalya, the lord of menDative singular
pāyasa-ardham dadau tadāपायस-अर्धम् ददौ तदाgave half of the rice-pudding thenVerb (perfect)
ardhāt ardham dadau ca apiअर्धात् अर्धम् ददौ च अपिand gave half of [the remaining] halfVerb (perfect)
sumitrāyai narādhipaḥसुमित्रायै नराधिपःthe lord of men, to SumitraDative singular

Shloka 1.16.28

WordDevanagariMeaningGrammatical role
kaikeyyai ca avaśiṣṭa-ardhamकैकेय्यै च अवशिष्ट-अर्धम्and the remaining half, to KaikeyiAccusative singular
dadau putra-artha-kāraṇātददौ पुत्र-अर्थ-कारणात्gave, for the sake and purpose of a sonVerb (perfect)
pradadau ca avaśiṣṭa-ardhamप्रददौ च अवशिष्ट-अर्धम्and gave the remaining halfVerb (perfect)
pāyasasya amṣta-upamamपायसस्य अम्ष्त-उपमम्of the nectar-like rice-puddingGenitive singular

Shloka 1.16.29

WordDevanagariMeaningGrammatical role
anucintya sumitrāyaiअनुचिन्त्य सुमित्रायैhaving reconsidered, to SumitraGerund (having done)
punaḥ eva mahī-patiḥपुनः एव मही-पतिःagain, the lord of the earthNominative singular
evam tāsām dadau rājāएवम् तासाम् ददौ राजाthus the king gave to thoseVerb (perfect)
bhāryāṇām pāyasam pṣthakभार्याणाम् पायसम् प्ष्थक्wives the rice-pudding separatelyAccusative singular

Scholar commentary

Shloka 1.16.27

valmikiramayan.net Prose Commentary

Desiraju Hanumanta Rao's prose rendering with embedded explanatory notes

(Part of the extended discussion of the payasam's unequal distribution among the three queens -- see the fuller note at shloka 29.)

1 of 16 traditions have commentary on this shloka. Traditions without a verse-specific commentary here are omitted rather than filled in.

Shloka 1.16.28

valmikiramayan.net Prose Commentary

Desiraju Hanumanta Rao's prose rendering with embedded explanatory notes

(Part of the extended discussion of the payasam's unequal distribution among the three queens -- see the fuller note at shloka 29.)

1 of 16 traditions have commentary on this shloka. Traditions without a verse-specific commentary here are omitted rather than filled in.

Shloka 1.16.29

valmikiramayan.net Prose Commentary

Desiraju Hanumanta Rao's prose rendering with embedded explanatory notes

The source notes this exact apportionment -- half to Kausalya, a quarter to Sumitra, an eighth to Kaikeyi, and the final eighth back to Sumitra -- is much discussed by traditionalists, citing the Adhyatma Ramayana's argument linking these shares to the four brothers born from them: Kausalya (half) bears Rama, Sumitra (two eighths total) bears both Lakshmana and Shatrughna, and Kaikeyi (one eighth) bears Bharata. The source is emphatic that the unequal shares do not imply unequal divinity -- the Absolute cannot be divided into literal fractions, so the dessert functions only as a medium enabling the incarnation, not as the incarnation's substance being parceled out. It also notes a related traditional reading in which Rama is Vishnu himself, Bharata and Shatrughna are his Disc and Conch, and Lakshmana is Adishesha, the serpent Vishnu reclines on -- while adding that Rama himself, throughout the epic, never claims divinity and calls himself only nimitta maatra, an incidental instrument of events, which the source reads as evidence Rama is best understood as maryaada purushottama (the ideal virtuous man) rather than a fractional avatar. Separately, the order and timing of the queens' drinking -- Kausalya first and immediately, Sumitra waiting, Kaikeyi waiting longer still -- is cited by some traditional commentators as the basis for treating Rama as the eldest son and therefore eligible for the crown prince title later in the epic.

1 of 16 traditions have commentary on this shloka. Traditions without a verse-specific commentary here are omitted rather than filled in.

Reference: 1.16.27-29 · Bāla Kāṇḍa