Shloka 16.4Unverified draft

स हि तेपे तपस्तीव्रं दीर्घकालमरिन्दम। येन तुष्टोऽभवद्ब्रह्मा लोककृल्लोकपूर्वज:।।1.16.4।।

Meaning

"O tormentor of foes, that Ravana practiced severe austerities for a long time, by which he pleased Brahma, the first-born creator of the worlds."

Word-by-word (pada-artha)

WordDevanagariMeaningGrammatical role
saḥ hi tepe tapaḥ tīvramसः हि तेपे तपः तीव्रम्for he performed intense austerityVerb (perfect)
dīrgha-kālam arim-damaदीर्घ-कालम् अरिम्-दमfor a long time, O tamer of enemiesAccusative (adverbial)
yena tuṣṭaḥ abhavat brahmāयेन तुष्टः अभवत् ब्रह्माby which Brahma became pleasedVerb (imperfect)
loka-kṛt loka-pūrvajaḥलोक-कृत् लोक-पूर्वजःthe maker of the worlds, the first-born of the worldsNominative singular

Reference: 1.16.4 · Bāla Kāṇḍa