Shloka 48.5-6Unverified draft

भूषयन्ताविमं देशं चन्द्रसूर्याविवाम्बरम्। परस्परस्य सदृशौ प्रमाणेङ्गितचेष्टितै:।।1.48.5।। किमर्थं च मुनिश्रेष्ठ सम्प्राप्तौ दुर्गमे पथि। वरायुधधरौ वीरौ श्रोतुमिच्छामि तत्त्वत:।।1.48.6।।

Meaning

They adorn this land as moon and sun adorn the sky, alike to one another in stature and in bearing and gesture; for what reason, best of sages, have these heroes bearing excellent weapons come by this difficult path — I wish truly to hear.

Word-by-word (pada-artha)

Shloka 1.48.5

WordDevanagariMeaningGrammatical role
bhūṣayantau imam deśamभूषयन्तौ इमम् देशम्adorning this landNominative dual participle / Accusative
candra-sūryau iva ambaramचन्द्र-सूर्यौ इव अम्बरम्as the moon and sun adorn the skyNominative dual / Comparative / Accusative
parasparasya sadṛśauपरस्परस्य सदृशौresembling each otherGenitive / Nominative dual
pramāṇa-iṅgita-ceṣṭitaiḥप्रमाण-इङ्गित-चेष्टितैःin stature, gesture, and demeanorInstrumental plural

Shloka 1.48.6

WordDevanagariMeaningGrammatical role
kim-artham ca muni-śreṣṭhaकिम्-अर्थम् च मुनि-श्रेष्ठand for what purpose, O best of sagesAdverbial / Vocative
samprāptau durgame pathiसम्प्राप्तौ दुर्गमे पथिhave these two arrived on this difficult pathNominative dual / Locative / Locative
vara-āyudha-dharau vīrauवर-आयुध-धरौ वीरौthe two heroes bearing excellent weaponsNominative dual (x2)
śrotum icchāmi tattvataḥश्रोतुम् इच्छामि तत्त्वतःI wish to hear the truthInfinitive / Verb (present) / Adverbial

Scholar commentary

Shloka 1.48.5

valmikiramayan.net Prose Commentary

Desiraju Hanumanta Rao's prose rendering with embedded explanatory notes

The source notes that no other sage or saint along the journey had raised the question of why two princes were traveling on foot, since footslogging is simply what ascetics do -- but King Sumati, being a fatherly king rather than an ascetic, notices it. The source reads Vishvamitra's whole journey with the princes as an unstated 'rehearsal' for Rama's coming forest exile, and observes that a divine feat requiring travel -- here, winning Sita by bending Shiva's bow, for 'universal goodness' -- justifies the exertion.

1 of 16 traditions have commentary on this shloka. Traditions without a verse-specific commentary here are omitted rather than filled in.

Shloka 1.48.6

valmikiramayan.net Prose Commentary

Desiraju Hanumanta Rao's prose rendering with embedded explanatory notes

The source glosses 'ingita,' translated as facial-language, as an extended term for the voiced-yet-muted expressions conveyed through smiles, eyebrow movement, and lip movement -- what would now be called face-reading. It notes this is the same skill Sugriva later invokes when sending Hanuman to Rama and Lakshmana, telling him to read their facial expressions to know them.

1 of 16 traditions have commentary on this shloka. Traditions without a verse-specific commentary here are omitted rather than filled in.

Reference: 1.48.5-6 · Bāla Kāṇḍa