Shloka 18.21-22Unverified draft

अतीत्यैकादशाहं तु नामकर्म तथाऽकरोत्। ज्येष्ठं रामं महात्मानं भरतं कैकयीसुतम्।।1.18.20।। सौमित्रिं लक्ष्मणमिति शत्रुघ्नमपरं तथा। वसिष्ठ: परमप्रीतो नामानि कृतवान् तदा।।1.18.21।।

Meaning

When eleven days had passed, he performed the naming ceremony: the great-souled eldest was named Rama, Kaikeyi's son Bharata, and Sumitra's sons Lakshmana and Shatrughna — Vashishtha, greatly pleased, gave these names.

Word-by-word (pada-artha)

Shloka 1.18.21

WordDevanagariMeaningGrammatical role
atītya ekādaśa-aham tuअतीत्य एकादश-अहम् तुhaving passed the eleventh dayGerund (having done)
nāma-karma tathā akarotनाम-कर्म तथा अकरोत्he then performed the naming-ceremonyVerb (imperfect)
jyeṣṭham rāmam mahātmānamज्येष्ठम् रामम् महात्मानम्the eldest, the great-souled RamaAccusative singular
bharatam kaikayī-sutamभरतम् कैकयी-सुतम्Bharata, the son of KaikeyiAccusative singular

Shloka 1.18.22

WordDevanagariMeaningGrammatical role
saumitrim lakṣmaṇam itiसौमित्रिम् लक्ष्मणम् इतिthe son of Sumitra as LakshmanaAccusative singular
śatrughnam aparam tathāशत्रुघ्नम् अपरम् तथाand the other likewise as ShatrughnaAccusative singular
vasiṣṭhaḥ parama-prītaḥवसिष्ठः परम-प्रीतःVasishtha, greatly pleasedNominative singular
nāmāni kṛtavān tadāनामानि कृतवान् तदाgave these names thenVerb (periphrastic perfect)

Scholar commentary

valmikiramayan.net Prose Commentary

Desiraju Hanumanta Rao's prose rendering with embedded explanatory notes

(Continues the name-etymology discussion from shloka 20 -- see the fuller note there.)

1 of 16 traditions have commentary on this shloka. Traditions without a verse-specific commentary here are omitted rather than filled in.

Reference: 1.18.21-22 · Bāla Kāṇḍa