Shloka 30.2Unverified draft

भगवन् श्रोतुमिच्छावो यस्मिन् काले निशाचरौ। संरक्षणीयौ तौ ब्रह्मन्नातिवर्तेत तत्क्षणम्।।1.30.2।।

Meaning

Blessed one, we wish to know at what hour the night-wanderers come, so that moment does not slip past us unguarded.

Word-by-word (pada-artha)

WordDevanagariMeaningGrammatical role
bhagavan śrotum icchāvaḥभगवन् श्रोतुम् इच्छावःO blessed one, we two wish to hearVocative / Infinitive / Verb (present, dual)
yasmin kāle niśā-carauयस्मिन् काले निशा-चरौat what time the two night-roamersLocative singular / Nominative dual
saṃrakṣaṇīyau tau brahmanसंरक्षणीयौ तौ ब्रह्मन्those two are to be guarded against, O BrahminNominative dual / Vocative
na ativarteta tat-kṣaṇamन अतिवर्तेत तत्-क्षणम्so that that moment may not pass unnoticedVerb (optative) / Accusative

Scholar commentary

valmikiramayan.net Prose Commentary

Desiraju Hanumanta Rao's prose rendering with embedded explanatory notes

The source flags a grammarian's difficulty in this verse: the word order suggests the princes are asking 'at which time are the two demons to be safeguarded by us,' which reads oddly. Rama Tilaka resolves this by attributing 'to be safeguarded' (rakshNiiyau) to the ritual itself, not to the demons -- the princes are asking from whom the ritual is to be safeguarded, not asking about safeguarding the demons.

1 of 16 traditions have commentary on this shloka. Traditions without a verse-specific commentary here are omitted rather than filled in.

Reference: 1.30.2 · Bāla Kāṇḍa