Shloka 65.3-4Unverified draft

पूर्णे वर्षसहस्रे तु काष्ठभूतं महामुनिम्। विघ्नैर्बहुभिराधूतं क्रोधो नान्तर आविशत् स कृत्वा निश्चयं राम तप आतिष्टदव्ययम्।

Meaning

After completion of a thousand years the great ascetic became a piece of wood. In spite of many impediments, he was unshaken, anger did not enter into his mind. O Rama with firm determination he practised austerities.

Word-by-word (pada-artha)

Shloka 1.65.3

WordDevanagariMeaningGrammatical role
pūrṇe varṣa-sahasre tuपूर्णे वर्ष-सहस्रे तुwhen a thousand years were completeLocative absolute
kāṣṭha-bhūtam mahā-munimकाष्ठ-भूतम् महा-मुनिम्the great sage having become like a piece of woodAccusative (x2)
vighnaiḥ bahubhiḥ ādhūtamविघ्नैः बहुभिः आधूतम्though shaken by many obstaclesInstrumental plural / Instrumental plural / Accusative
krodhaḥ na antara āviśatक्रोधः न अन्तर आविशत्anger did not enter within [him]Nominative / Negation / Adverbial / Verb (imperfect)

Shloka 1.65.4

WordDevanagariMeaningGrammatical role
sa kṛtvā niścayam rāmaस कृत्वा निश्चयम् रामhe, having made a firm resolve, O RamaNominative / Gerund / Accusative / Vocative
tapaḥ ātiṣṭhat avyayamतपः आतिष्ठत् अव्ययम्continued his unfailing austerityAccusative / Verb (imperfect) / Accusative

Scholar commentary

valmikiramayan.net Prose Commentary

Desiraju Hanumanta Rao's prose rendering with embedded explanatory notes

The source glosses the meal Vishvamitra prepares here as vaishvadevam, a sacred, self-cooked preparation, citing the annotation: anena vaishvadeva ante samaagato atithiH svayam upoShyaa api sviiya anna pradaanena sambhojya iti suucitam -- 'by this it is indicated that a guest who arrives just as the vaishvadeva rite concludes must be fed from that very food, even if it means the host himself goes without.' This explains why Vishvamitra, on completing a thousand years of ascesis for this one meal, unhesitatingly surrenders all of it to Indra disguised as a Brahmin guest, and starves rather than break the guest-feeding obligation.

1 of 16 traditions have commentary on this shloka. Traditions without a verse-specific commentary here are omitted rather than filled in.

Reference: 1.65.3-4 · Bāla Kāṇḍa